angelaquarles asked: Saw your post about the internal dialog... Timely for me as I'm struggling with trying to figure out that fine line -- posted about it last week on my wordpress blog, trying to generate discussion and insight. Your post has added another layer to my understanding, thanks :) Good luck with revision!
Emotional Dump or Needed Info?
I’m coming to the end of my current manuscript, and this is always the point where I start questioning whether I’ve conveyed the characters’ motivations and emotional journey well enough. I struggle with this a little, because I favor less information rather than more. I don’t like to explain the hero’s or heroine’s thoughts and feelings in an “I want A,...
Work In Progress
Finally totally into this new book. I love my tough, edgy L.A. heroine with a chip on her shoulder. Love her. God. The title will be CLOSE ENOUGH TO TOUCH. Because she’s right there, but he still can’t quite reach her. Not really. Here’s my current favorite part: Cole looked away first. Good. She didn’t know what the hell he was so upset about. She hadn’t taken anything from...